Saturday, May 19, 2007

Unnoticed

A child alone
Living in the shadows of the dark
He lives unnoticed
He sits and waits for the day
To pass away unnoticed
Like one star in the universe
If he goes no one will know
Because there are a billion more
To cover up the space of his absence
He left unnoticed
By everyone

~I feel this is my best poem!~

6 comments:

SCHIZOPHRENIC MIND said...
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mariahlee said...

this is amazing. i love it.

SCHIZOPHRENIC MIND said...

Thanks! i thought of this when we were learning about the universe in science class.
I am glad you like it!
thanks for the comment!!

DayDreamer said...

Outstanding, thoughtful and wonderfully written.

Unknown said...

i think this was a good poem. bye!!!jk good job on this

SCHIZOPHRENIC MIND said...

thanks everyone! i am really proud of this piece of work!!^_^